Interesting, especily sweats, but u should rething the begining a little bit! That`s wright, a little to techno, but sounds ok!

uuu, i`m diggin it! Reverb the cymbals at the begining, to spice it a little bit (or smthing else - personal opinion)! Full of emotion, and well thought!
Cheers!

Hey, i lik ethe bleeps, sound ok, maybe u shoul change them a pitch or 2 sometimes, some distortion to kkep it from being 2 reptetitve. But u have 2 do smth 2 soften the bass! Some more work, and some magic touches should make it sound better!

Hey guys, i`m leaving a set of 4 tracks to ur judgement! As more constructive criticism as possible:P


http://www.sendspace.com/file/tfkpwo

Cheers!

Ok...i`m stunned! Ur talent has to be out there send demos, do whatever it takes! track sounds great!

Keep up the good work!

Cheers!

Firtsly i lik the way u deconstructed the track at the begining, but it would sound better somewhere near the middle. Secondly, the bass drums....is kinda backgrounded by the other elements, reduce a little bit the volume on the other elements, and bring it up on the bass drum, an on a main...elemen...

No comment, pure and simple MNML! Nice wooork! Defenetly a keeper! I surely don`t have the experience to expose any kind of criticism on ur work....so `im keepin` my comments! Only one thing......It`s great!

Keep up the great work!

Hey guys....i`m submiting a sample from a track that i`m workin on....Opinions!? Tnx!

opium - first doze unfinshed.mp3 - 2.03MB