heres the 2nd mix. its alot better than the first structure wise. i didnt add that much just a little reverb on the percussion and abit of saturation on the melody.. tell me what you think. im having trouble with the build up. should i add some hats.. more percs? some more ideas would be great http:...

thanks for the response.. ye im going to mess around with it abit more today. that was a rough mix of the track in realtime, its lacking movement. and yes its an 909 rim shot
keep the feedback coming its doing a great deal of good
cheers!

thanks for the feedback.. iv added a slight reverb on the percussions and boosted the attack.. sounds alot better with the melody i have messed around with the variation to make the track more intresting but atm its not fitting rite so im gonna mess around abit more. will post a new mix up tomorow. ...

thanks bud

bump any advice would be great

http://www.zshare.net/audio/52949644afe21fa1/

its not very good.. im just asking for some advice/critisism so i can improve the track. hasnt been mastered or anything.. i just mixed it whilst recording.
cheers!

worked it out.. froze the track and converted to audio

btw the notes are being played threw the massive synthesizer