Löw - Snow falls

[japatap]

[qoute]I hope that ive said something constructive here.[/quote]

sure you did.. thanks

first of all i think it's realy a personal track. it shows how i felt while makin this. I think the track has a begin middle and an end.
It's build with 3 parts...

the intro (beginning)
2.44 - middle
5.15 the qlimax and end

the synth line is based on the string and the other sound. It's almost the same line but with a few more notes in it.

[credit_agro]

first of all i think it's realy a personal track. it shows how i felt while makin this. I think the track has a begin middle and an end.
It's build with 3 parts...

the intro (beginning)
2.44 - middle
5.15 the qlimax and end

Yes, there is an intro, middle and end but you've missed my point. The intro doesn't introduce me!! It goes straight into that chord progression which changes note too quick. Maybe try stretching those notes out much longer with that pad and try to use the pad as a theme setter rather than a melodic element.

[japatap]

ahh ok. i get it now i also thought making the chords longer and take away some... cause it is changing chord quick but for some reason i dind't

i now what you mean.. think i will try to make a second version with that in mind.. thanks.. you made me look at it in a other way

[credit_agro]

No probs. Looking forward to hearing the new version.

Best!