Paulo da Fonseca

etnarama · Post by **etnarama** » Wed Mar 07, 2007 12:04 pm

My latest track.....
http://www.zshare.net/audio/this-is-bei ... a-mp3.html

Comments appreciated.
You can stream directly....

Cheers
Paulo

jimjim1983 · Post by **jimjim1983** » Wed Mar 07, 2007 9:44 pm

I don't really like the electro sound, but that;s a matter of taste

etnarama · Post by **etnarama** » Thu Mar 08, 2007 5:34 pm

Ok but besides that, production wise and all, do you like it?

P.

fl0w · Post by **fl0w** » Thu Mar 08, 2007 11:34 pm

hmm not a bad track. I don't like everything (some sounds annoy me), maybe because they're too clean?
The kick is nice, pure and powerful (you should avoid wild left/right panning like at 2'26"). The first part, before the voices, sounds too dry. I like those voices. After the voices, the sound gets better and more lively, thanks to reverbs, to the background hiss etc.

Though the track evolves a lot, there's no significant peak, the hair on my arms didn't move ^^

Well, I'm not totally convinced. Some sounds get on my nerves. The notes you play don't, hmm, flow. I don't know, but something is wrong.

I suspect that, consciously or not, you're trying to imitate tracks you've heard before. Try to be more spontaneous!

jk_scowling · Post by **jk_scowling** » Sat Mar 10, 2007 2:35 pm

Not my cup of tea but pretty well produced. The beat is nice and tight and the main riff gives it a nice groove, but the sounds are a bit dated. But thats electro.

etnarama · Post by **etnarama** » Sat Mar 10, 2007 3:11 pm

Again thank you for your comments.
Paulo