nice. if it were me, i'd make the following changes:
1. lower the volume of the ride/cymbal
2. widen the stereo (a lot) and work more stereo into the composition
3. decrease the amplitude of everything over 18,000hz -- the ride and a piece of the hi hat is a little overbearing right now
4. increase the amplitude of anything under 80hz. the bassline and beats would drive this track a lot harder if you could hear them more
5. shorten it to no more than 5:30 (you could ditch the last minute altogether, and maybe not reintroduce the ride)
just my thoughts. i think the track has potential -- the composition and concept are great, but it's in need of some editing and mastering.
Last edited by LetsGoOutside on Fri Apr 29, 2005 8:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.