Ziggy Sehjal - Cherry Pie

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ziggysehjal
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Ziggy Sehjal - Cherry Pie

Post by ziggysehjal »

Hi all, just finished making my first track.. :D
Feedback would be most appreciated!

myspace.com/ziggysehjal
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Post by kristofason »

introduce urself Zig!

this is a lad who was shown minimal about 8 months ago and fell straight in love with it,he's been producing stuff about 2 months!! I think he's got fuckin talent to be honest,my first tunes were sh!t...

the new sub works by the way Ziggy....
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Post by kristofason »

come on,some input for my friend please if ya would,he needs a confidence boost he thinks he's sh!t!!!
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Post by eryx666 »

hey man, you have some wicked tunes there! cant believe only two months :))) good job
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Post by ziggysehjal »

thanks mate..

only been a few months, i still have a lot to learn..

cheers for listening
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Post by msfilter »

hey
this sounds really good, very well mixed.
maybe try a tad more melodic developement.
The sounds you've used are quality!
Keep at it, you could definitely go places.
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Post by ziggysehjal »

thanks for the feedback, much appreciated!
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Post by pfeiffer »

hey man, welcome on board - and congrats for joining the most fun hobby ever!

the beats sound pretty well mixed,
crispy and interesting, which is really unusual for a beginner!

you could work on the arrangement, its kinda 5min going at the same pace
Im missin one part which really drives forward if u know what i mean

for instance keeping only the low freq elements and precussions for a while till a sizzling hihat kicks in or so..

keep it up
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