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Here's the link http://soundcloud.com/klank/four-sixths
Let me know what you think...
OK, i think you gave me a lot of stuff to think about.Phurniture wrote:Alright, (on my other system now)...hmmm, very simple. There's never more than a couple of sounds ever happening, which isn't always an issue necessarily, but in this case it feels like the track doesn't know where it wants to go.
For me, I'd like to hear some more syncopation in the rhythm and more modulation (effects) of the synth. The track doesn't build towards anything, and in this type of music the creation of suspense through a build up is crucial.
Production wise, the track is clear and clean. Good, thick kick. I view this track as a tool, rather than a production I'd play on it's own.
Thx for the advice, I will check out some radio slave tracks...JonasEdenbrandt wrote:Like someone already said try working on the song structure. Listen to a few popular tracks and count the bars to see what they do. My tip is a simple radio slave track since they are very straight forward but still exciting.
Also you lack in the lower spectrum, try using another kick and perhaps layering it with a bass. Now the kick sounds very diffrent in some parts of the track pecause of masking so if you bring it down to a lower spectrum u get heavier track and also the kick wont sound different in the mix.
On the bright side i like how some syntheziers kinda play solos using previous material, this gives kind of a jazzy feeling to the track. Also i like alot of the synth melodies and sounds but instead of throwing all of these ideas into one track try making like three or something since theres alot of material here thats great.