my first track ever made
its some kind of experimental and dubstep stuff
give some honest opinion please
http://soundcloud.com/user3364939/ningu ... -de-outono
what you think about it ?
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- mnml maxi
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I like.
Actually I like the mood, the pads, very much.
But I think the kick/bass combination could be better. It sounds too tiny, and does not fit the pads perfectly in my opinion.
And, also, I'd love more variations for kick/bass, percussions. I love when a loop is running all along a track without variation, but this loop must be very hypnotizing and efficient. And, for me, that's not the case here, it sounds random in my ears, so... variations or creation of another combination. (just imagine how boring would be the very minimalist and repetitiv sound of Sleeparchive if the man was not good at creating hypnotic grooves with nothing.)
Overall, super mood which needs a better "rhtyhm" to be excellent.
at least, for me.
Actually I like the mood, the pads, very much.
But I think the kick/bass combination could be better. It sounds too tiny, and does not fit the pads perfectly in my opinion.
And, also, I'd love more variations for kick/bass, percussions. I love when a loop is running all along a track without variation, but this loop must be very hypnotizing and efficient. And, for me, that's not the case here, it sounds random in my ears, so... variations or creation of another combination. (just imagine how boring would be the very minimalist and repetitiv sound of Sleeparchive if the man was not good at creating hypnotic grooves with nothing.)
Overall, super mood which needs a better "rhtyhm" to be excellent.
at least, for me.
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fckpatrick bateman wrote:WHY, dear god WHY, didn't you use the right forum???
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