no offence, but your friends are probably not used to a lot if they say
it was excellent...
I'm not quite sure if you paid attention to anything I said, because I can't really hear it.
there's still way too much reverb on your snare.
can't you hear it's just drowning in your track instead of keeping the rhythm section nice and tight ?
if I remember correctly, I said something about the fact that you should try
less notes in your melodies.
you got way too many notes in your bassline, not to mention the others.
I still hear almost no variation in your percussion.
the only real improvement I could tell were your breaks, although they are cliché as hell and have been done 10000 times before and way better by many many others.
and your sounds go a bit better together, but they're very very
very cliché.
honestly, doesn't it ever occur to you this might take EFFORT ?
This automatically means TIME as well.
I posted some advice on thursday, you post a new track by saturday.
You honestly think any proper producer makes even half decent tracks so fast ?
You can really tell this was way too fast made, and that there was not enough effort put into it at all.
If you want to stay lazy, go ahead, you'll never get to a proper produced track.
I give up, really.
I wonder why I even bother...
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