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Jonas Edenbrandt - Journey Through
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Jonas Edenbrandt - Journey Through
New track from me. Check it out!
And give me some good feedback
And give me some good feedback
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tja, grym låt! tar feedbacken på engelska 
I dig the track, the lofi simplicity is great. You really inspire me to make productions with only a 10th of all the crap I usually chuck into them. There are only two things I can think of in terms of constructive feedback:
the first is that the main hook is a bit overpowered (to my at this moment rather fatigued ears) - the harmonic content of it will have no problem punching through the mix even if you lower the volume by say 3dB. The tiny bit of distortion on it makes it quite draining to listen to for such a long time.
Also, personally I think that the track shows a very nice aspect of itself at the 5.55 drop, perhaps you should play around with it more? That spacious bass and springy synth sounds really good together, I would elaborate more on those two elements.
At first I was going to say something about the track length (not that I'm entitled to, I rarely clock in below 8 minutes myself) but now on a second listen it flows very nicely into my ears.
So all in all, nice trip!
I dig the track, the lofi simplicity is great. You really inspire me to make productions with only a 10th of all the crap I usually chuck into them. There are only two things I can think of in terms of constructive feedback:
the first is that the main hook is a bit overpowered (to my at this moment rather fatigued ears) - the harmonic content of it will have no problem punching through the mix even if you lower the volume by say 3dB. The tiny bit of distortion on it makes it quite draining to listen to for such a long time.
Also, personally I think that the track shows a very nice aspect of itself at the 5.55 drop, perhaps you should play around with it more? That spacious bass and springy synth sounds really good together, I would elaborate more on those two elements.
At first I was going to say something about the track length (not that I'm entitled to, I rarely clock in below 8 minutes myself) but now on a second listen it flows very nicely into my ears.
So all in all, nice trip!