Okie Dokie!
I just discovered this site and am very happy I have...
Now it's my turn to let you know what I'm about...
Here's a sweetie shortie I'm in the process of listening and gathering ideas for...enjoyable as it is (I think):
http://s65.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3494 ... YTOYQ1M4IM
Enjoy!
ThomasBelley--Geschelcht Auf Dem Boden
about to listen:
i dont like the voice. but thats just me....but the beats and crackles is good
you need a more prominant snare in there...i cant tell if you got one or not...but if yo do its way too low....need to bring it out ...itll give it more structure....
i always think that the key point is the snare because thats where a person decides to move in the other direction...do you know what i mean?...When theyre dancing...however they dance...theyre waiting on 2 things....the kick...the snare part to make em shake their junk.....
so when u add a snare...make sure it stands out...i dont mean loud....just listen to some songs and youll get the idea.
nice song...could be better with that snare
i dont like the voice. but thats just me....but the beats and crackles is good
you need a more prominant snare in there...i cant tell if you got one or not...but if yo do its way too low....need to bring it out ...itll give it more structure....
i always think that the key point is the snare because thats where a person decides to move in the other direction...do you know what i mean?...When theyre dancing...however they dance...theyre waiting on 2 things....the kick...the snare part to make em shake their junk.....
so when u add a snare...make sure it stands out...i dont mean loud....just listen to some songs and youll get the idea.
nice song...could be better with that snare
I'm not keen on that vocal, does not really fit the rest of the track. Definitely needs a good powerful snare to give this one some movement. Sounds a bit retro to me which is quite cool. That last sound at the end of the sample, would maybe like to hear that featured a bit more.
Some good building blocks here.
Some good building blocks here.