Track I made in Reason and it seems the local yocals digged it, pretty simple stuff but id like to think it tells a story, not really intended for the dancefloor but maybe the after after party, anywho hope ya dig it
Only thing i would suggest is to cut the reverb occassionally just to mess with peoples heads - even just on the beats for 4 or 8 bars. Not lots of messing but just to perk it up once or twice.
Needs some solid beats, for starters. I like the synth later on, but if you had some nice, solid tight beats driving the track... something a little more stompy, you could maintain your gentler appeal while having something good for the dancefloor too.
"...Michaelangelo is a PARTY DUDE.. *PAARTEEEEEEE!* "