Löw - Snow falls

japatap · Post by **japatap** » Thu Feb 08, 2007 3:21 pm

Inspired by all the snow fallin down here.

Artist: Löw [Peperoni]
Name: Snow falls
Bitrate: 320 kbps
Size: 17.2 Mb

updated the track, same url!

http://stud.cmd.hro.nl/0781364/upload/L ... 0falls.mp3

Electribe · Post by **Electribe** » Fri Feb 09, 2007 8:08 pm

I like it. the synth work sounds good. but try replacing the kick with a softer one!

japatap · Post by **japatap** » Sat Feb 10, 2007 1:22 pm

tnx m8!, will take a look at the kick, and try make it softer!

lcaise · Post by **lcaise** » Tue Feb 13, 2007 7:27 pm

nice work, but:

- too much melodic for me
- hihats line is very random, I dnont like it :/

rest of track is good.

japatap · Post by **japatap** » Tue Feb 13, 2007 7:56 pm

lcaise wrote: - too much melodic for me
- hihats line is very random, I dnont like it :/

rest of track is good.

thanks!! can imagine its to much melodic, personaly thing

about the hats.... i will see if i can make it better.
tnx a lot!

fl0w · Post by **fl0w** » Tue Feb 13, 2007 8:20 pm

In French I'd say "le cul entre deux chaises" (the ass between two chairs). Said differently, I don't know what you want to do with this track.

How can I explain... The various elements of the track (strings, synths, hihats...) seem to go to different directions, sometimes deep, sometimes nervous. Am I supposed to listen to it in my sofa or dance to it?

The part I like best is after the break at 5'15". Then, the sound is more massive and coherent.

Here's what I suggest: make it FAT and epic. Double, triple the notes, stack several sounds. The rythmic synth is well programmed but make it yell! Think "Conan the Barbarian meets the Red Army Choir". You should use some acoustic sounds to replace the dull synths and beatboxes.

What do you think of it?

japatap · Post by **japatap** » Wed Feb 14, 2007 1:02 am

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fl0w wrote:but make it yell! Think "Conan the Barbarian meets the Red Army Choir". You should use some acoustic sounds to replace the dull synths

What do you think of it?

hahahha great comment, tnx man!! i know what you think. it has to scream the synth line!! has got to have more feeling...

i made this track in the days it was snowing and notthing to do... it has a kind of deep down feeling... maybe that needs to be heavier

and also don't realy know if ya can dance to it.. let the listerners decide

credit_agro · Post by **credit_agro** » Wed Feb 14, 2007 11:45 am

I actually went away from listening to this thinking I don't know what the track is really about. I never got the chance to get into it. This track needs an beginning, middle and probably an end. (I didn't listen to the whole track to know.) I would think that the synth line brought in around 2:50 is out of harmony. Try different notes maybe. Decide on the direction of the track first though. I like the percussion.

I hope that ive said something constructive here.