My latest track.....
http://www.zshare.net/audio/this-is-bei ... a-mp3.html
Comments appreciated.
You can stream directly....
Cheers
Paulo
Paulo da Fonseca
Paulo da Fonseca
Visit me on http://www.myspace.com/paulodafonseca
Comments and critiques are always welcomed...
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Ok but besides that, production wise and all, do you like it?
P.
P.
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hmm not a bad track. I don't like everything (some sounds annoy me), maybe because they're too clean?
The kick is nice, pure and powerful (you should avoid wild left/right panning like at 2'26"). The first part, before the voices, sounds too dry. I like those voices. After the voices, the sound gets better and more lively, thanks to reverbs, to the background hiss etc.
Though the track evolves a lot, there's no significant peak, the hair on my arms didn't move ^^
Well, I'm not totally convinced. Some sounds get on my nerves. The notes you play don't, hmm, flow. I don't know, but something is wrong.
I suspect that, consciously or not, you're trying to imitate tracks you've heard before. Try to be more spontaneous!
The kick is nice, pure and powerful (you should avoid wild left/right panning like at 2'26"). The first part, before the voices, sounds too dry. I like those voices. After the voices, the sound gets better and more lively, thanks to reverbs, to the background hiss etc.
Though the track evolves a lot, there's no significant peak, the hair on my arms didn't move ^^
Well, I'm not totally convinced. Some sounds get on my nerves. The notes you play don't, hmm, flow. I don't know, but something is wrong.
I suspect that, consciously or not, you're trying to imitate tracks you've heard before. Try to be more spontaneous!
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Again thank you for your comments.
Paulo
Paulo
Visit me on http://www.myspace.com/paulodafonseca
Comments and critiques are always welcomed...
Comments and critiques are always welcomed...