[Minimal Techno] Magda mag den Tee

mando · Post by **mando** » Fri Apr 06, 2007 5:53 pm

Magda mag den Tee
13.09 Min. / 320 kbps / 31 MB

reworked now
vocals: me

klick me

Magda mag den Tee (Instrumental)

svenlito · Post by **svenlito** » Fri Apr 06, 2007 9:33 pm

i dont like it at all...

Zinthek · Post by **Zinthek** » Fri Apr 06, 2007 11:12 pm

I like it but I hate the title

mando · Post by **mando** » Fri Apr 06, 2007 11:22 pm

@ sven
thx for your truely feedback!

zinthek: thx too

Red Kite · Post by **Red Kite** » Mon Apr 09, 2007 2:50 pm

Nice one! I bet you're a fan of old Emmanuel Top records. "Radio", anyone?

I think the kick is a bit over the top. The first break is way to long, and the track completely looses tension between ca. 8 and 12min. But I like all the sounds and esp the very cool drum loop. Cut a few mins out, master it a little less aggressively, it would be a perfect track. Well and change the title maybe

mando · Post by **mando** » Wed Apr 11, 2007 1:38 pm

reworked

changing the title to "magda mag den tee"

additional vocals from me (i dont know, if its work)

@red kite: yes, i like emmanuel top, but it wasnt inspired by him

PsyTox · Post by **PsyTox** » Wed Apr 11, 2007 4:48 pm

it's not bad, not bad at all! Things I like (always start positive my Mummy says): the ryhtm and the buildup and also the sounds used.
What I don't like is the voice in the beginning and the fact that it's way too long. It would sound a lot more "punchy" if you would cut off half (make it a nice 7 minutes). Overal it sounds pretty good though.

Red Kite · Post by **Red Kite** » Wed Apr 11, 2007 6:44 pm

First: The vocals were a very, very, very bad idea. They sound horrible and destroy the whole atmosphere of the track. Is sounded way better without them.

Also I'm not sure about the clave (?) loop you added. It wasn't nessessary and kinda distracts from the rest of the percussion. And since "sinner in me" I just can't stand these sounds anymore

The length I think is quite perfect now. 7min? No fucking way! A track like that needs a descent length of 12+min, or it looses its hypnotic impact. Tracks from Emmanuel Top and Josh Wink always got there power out of their oversize (remember "meditation will manifest"?) so if you took out the stuff you added and kept the new duration I'd be perfectly happy with it (maybe cut off half a minute from the first break, cuz people on the floor get really confused if there isn't any percussion for more than a minute)

Last and least: the title didn't improve much

Btw I only keep bitching about the track because I really, really like it. If I had a label I would strongly consider releasing it! Keep it up, good work!