Mathew Kleig - Outer Sphere

Kleig · Post by **Kleig** » Thu Oct 04, 2007 11:02 pm

This track is a very melodic one, though still pretty "minimal"

Listen here: http://www.myspace.com/mathewkleig

Feedback would be appreciated

Rochey · Post by **Rochey** » Fri Oct 05, 2007 12:41 am

very haunting start

like the paul ritch esque perc

I like the bleepy thing that comes in around 2.30

all hell seems to have broken loose after 4.50

it's good! melodic & dark which can be quite hard to do!

only thing I can think that you could do to improve it is maybe take out the main hook not altogether just like a breakdown!

Kleig · Post by **Kleig** » Fri Oct 05, 2007 6:53 am

Rochey wrote:very haunting start

like the paul ritch esque perc

I like the bleepy thing that comes in around 2.30

all hell seems to have broken loose after 4.50

it's good! melodic & dark which can be quite hard to do!

only thing I can think that you could do to improve it is maybe take out the main hook not altogether just like a breakdown!

Thanks for the feedback

I'll try that breakdown thingy at some point!

Kleig · Post by **Kleig** » Sat Oct 06, 2007 12:36 am

Updated the track, now it has better break down

leoncio · Post by **leoncio** » Sun Oct 07, 2007 1:46 am

ey very nice bleep dudee!! i like it very much!! good job!!

Kleig · Post by **Kleig** » Sun Oct 07, 2007 10:36 am

leoncio wrote:ey very nice bleep dudee!! i like it very much!! good job!!

Thanks man!

Rochey · Post by **Rochey** » Sun Oct 07, 2007 11:28 am

Yeah much better with the breakdown!

also I like the background reverby stuff you've got going on!

spur · Post by **spur** » Sun Oct 07, 2007 6:31 pm

I only listened to the updated version..it sounds cool anyway!