what you think about it ?

patcha · Post by **patcha** » Wed Nov 18, 2009 1:58 pm

my first track ever made
its some kind of experimental and dubstep stuff

give some honest opinion please

http://soundcloud.com/user3364939/ningu ... -de-outono

Dragonsand · Post by **Dragonsand** » Wed Nov 18, 2009 6:19 pm

I like.

Actually I like the mood, the pads, very much.

But I think the kick/bass combination could be better. It sounds too tiny, and does not fit the pads perfectly in my opinion.

And, also, I'd love more variations for kick/bass, percussions. I love when a loop is running all along a track without variation, but this loop must be very hypnotizing and efficient. And, for me, that's not the case here, it sounds random in my ears, so... variations or creation of another combination. (just imagine how boring would be the very minimalist and repetitiv sound of Sleeparchive if the man was not good at creating hypnotic grooves with nothing.)

Overall, super mood which needs a better "rhtyhm" to be excellent.

at least, for me.

patcha · Post by **patcha** » Thu Nov 19, 2009 11:22 am

thanks mate;)
i think you're right, everything is about more variety rythm, i try to do something with it.

patrick bateman · Post by **patrick bateman** » Thu Nov 19, 2009 11:31 am

WHY, dear god WHY, didn't you use the right forum???

http://www.mnml.nl/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=26

patcha · Post by **patcha** » Thu Nov 19, 2009 11:41 am

patrick bateman wrote:WHY, dear god WHY, didn't you use the right forum???

http://www.mnml.nl/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=26

fck

slickrick · Post by **slickrick** » Thu Nov 19, 2009 11:44 am

because nobody looks at the member section....

ewinz · Post by **ewinz** » Thu Nov 19, 2009 1:38 pm

agree for the kick bass

KrisM · Post by **KrisM** » Fri Nov 20, 2009 12:53 am

I love the pad sounds throughout. And the drum sounds, they fit nicely imo. The little spacial clickies all over the place are a nice touch, too. There were some times after 3 minutes i think it was where the drums sounded wacky random and felt "off" to me, but overall i really liked this.