dZivus - forgiven but not forgotten

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dZivus - forgiven but not forgotten

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hi,
i worked all night on this one and i am satisfied overall..but I don't have a real objective ear anymore with this one, i need your opinion guys, i am not objective enough..did i missed something??

i recorded some of samples in track with my new microphone,melodic pattern played on axiom..beat is created from 4 samples..

tnx for comment and useful tips..enjoy


style ---> minimal/ techno
playtime ---> 10 : 12 min

Link 1 ---> http://rapidshare.com/files/26924086/Dz ... n.mp3.html

Link 2 ---> http://www.megaupload.com/?d=81EMS4KI
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no one? :?
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Post by amphetax »

the 1st melody is kinda offbeat - don't like. Transitions are arid, sum parts really to much repetetive. Although i like the part with 2nd melody (phasing snares ?).
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second melody -- i made one hihat loop with random pitch, then i had put effects on it(delay,reverb) and then when i was recording i just play with resonators + -

tnx for the answer!
i will do something with that first melody..i dont know what??maybe i will delete that..
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arax3 wrote:second melody -- i made one hihat loop with random pitch, then i had put effects on it(delay,reverb) and then when i was recording i just play with resonators + -

tnx for the answer!
i will do something with that first melody..i dont know what??maybe i will delete that..
maybe quantization would help ?
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Post by sauce »

I listened. Like a lot of material posted here, it evolves very slowly, but that's the point, eh? I dig the track. I'm curious as to how you could perform it live. Any hands on techniques?
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Post by arax3 »

tnx for the comments !
i dont know because i am beginner in PA.. but i can tell u what channels do i have..so, one channel with bass, one with sub bass, two channels for melodies, one channel for percussion and two channels for hihats..

to amphetax --- i tried but i thing that now is even worse.. :(
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use as many cannels as you need.

some people use 2 or 3

some people use 40 or 50

whatever works best to achieve what you want to hear
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