Advice on two Kick&Bass

[Phune]

Hi, i'm opening this topic 'cause i want you to let me know what do you think about them.
The problem is that i made those basses in my studio with a pair of KRK Rokit 6, but then i've heard them in a mastering studio and they sounds completly different, like just a sine wave..now i've made an edit! Let me know what you hear.
Cheers

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[s.k.]

where? oops i saw the link now, my browser was acting up

to me they sound almost the same, nothing particularly wrong except for the low peak level... the rest is a matter of taste i guess

[Phune]

where? oops i saw the link now, my browser was acting up

to me they sound almost the same, nothing particularly wrong except for the low peak level... the rest is a matter of taste i guess

Thx, but you hear just like a sine wave? Or something more dark than it?

[s.k.]

no man, to answer your question it doesn't sound like just a sine. there are overtones. but if you want it more defined you could use another, higher bass note and low pass it like you probably did with that one.

[Phune]

no man, to answer your question it doesn't sound like just a sine. there are overtones. but if you want it more defined you could use another, higher bass note and low pass it like you probably did with that one.

thx..i'll try and post the new ones. Other advices?

[NomadSpectrum]

Sounds fine to me on my hifi, and studio headphones